Ka mau te wehi, Marsh. I can see Hulk getting angry as he writes this letter to his mum and hitting the wall or something. I look forward to reading more of your writing.
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Ka mau te wehi, Marsh. I can see Hulk getting angry as he writes this letter to his mum and hitting the wall or something. I look forward to reading more of your writing.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Marsh,
ReplyDeleteI am really impressed with your writing here. I can see you worked very hard and am proud of you. Keep it up mate. :)