Hello there Marsh,My name is Bilal and I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you used descriptive language. It also told me lots about the water cycle. Maybe next time you could add a bit information about the water cycle. If you want to check my learning here is the link http://wpsbilalc.blogspot.co.nz/ Blog you Later
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Wow! Awesome poster Marsh! this is so cool!
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Tino Pai, Marsh. It would be cool to have something explaining what all those words mean. Looking forward to more of your work.
ReplyDeleteHello there Marsh,My name is Bilal and I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you used descriptive language. It also told me lots about the water cycle. Maybe next time you could add a bit information about the water cycle. If you want to check my learning here is the link http://wpsbilalc.blogspot.co.nz/
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